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OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:28 pm

MY SHIPFIC.
BUT FIRST, LET ME INTRODUCE YOU TO THE CHARACTERS (put these codes in Pony Creator);
Natalie: 2S2S000020FE0000FFC49D000010800FEUF183700C000000N11B0075FC00000L107F3FCC004CB2

Miranda: 2S2S0000200D0099FE9E9E00001FEF600UN183700C000000J13F44CCFEF6000I11CCBC3F95B200

Now that that is done, here it is (PREPARE FOR BAD WRITING):

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Natalie was just a pony living in Coltlanta, having Miranda as her friend, miles away in Marephis.

But she never expected this.

The following is a true story.

It was a normal day in Atlanta.

That is, until Miranda showed up.

"Are you sure about this?" said Natalie.

"Trust me. It's the best thing you'll ever experience," said Miranda, gaining a certain look in her eyes as she pinned herself against Natalie.

"I don't know," said a worried Natalie, using her hooves to try to get away slowly.

"What are you doing?" said Miranda.

"I don't know, I guess i'm a little uneasy about this situation," remarked Natalie, blushing about the situation she was in.

"Are you kidding me? Trust me," said Miranda. "It'll be the best experience you will ever have."

"Well, okay," said an unsure Natalie.

Miranda then proceeded to hump Natalie's rump.

"BOING!" Natalie's wings had popped out due to the stimulation in her hormones.

"Augh..." said Natalie, having had what was called a true "wingboner" for the first time.

Afterwards, Miranda kissed Natalie on the mouth.

"See? I told you it feels good," said Miranda.

"Yeah, but..." said Natalie.

"But what?" said Miranda, wondering how Natalie was feeling.

"But... ugh..." Natalie's face turned green as she said this.

"Are you alright?"

"I think i'm gonna... ugh...."

Her stomach gurgled.

"throw up... *pukes*"

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Please tell me if you want more (I have 3 parts so far).
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Sovereignty of Discord on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:29 pm

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I'm watching you...
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:30 pm

Sovereignty of Discord wrote:...
I'm watching you...

This is just like one of those badly made OT bonuses. I know this shipfic is terrible. You may delete this thread if you wish.
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Sovereignty of Discord on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:31 pm

Keep going, but I'll be watching you...
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:32 pm

Sovereignty of Discord wrote:Keep going, but I'll be watching you...

Are you saying continue the shipfic?
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Sovereignty of Discord on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:32 pm

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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Pinkie Pie on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:32 pm

hawksfan wrote:Miranda then proceeded to hump Natalie's rump.



Is that the best you can do, OP?
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Sovereignty of Discord on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:33 pm

Yes.
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:36 pm

Pinkie Pie wrote:
hawksfan wrote:Miranda then proceeded to hump Natalie's rump.



Is that the best you can do, OP?

Yes... Embarassed

And sure, Sovereign.

PART 2
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The next day, at Griffon Tech...

"Hey, did you see the newspaper today?"

"No, what is it about?"

"Apparently Natalie had intercourse with some other pony!"

"Wow, really?"

"Yeah, look at page 7!"

After what happened last night, Natalie was recieving all sorts of attention.

She stepped into the office of the Technique newspaper, wondering how they even knew where she lived.

"How did you know my address?" she asked.

"Well, when you come to the school you are required to fill out the address," the Chief said.

"Oh yeah," Natalie responded, faintly blushing.

"But still. How on Equestria did you even SEE what was going on? Anything you saw was obviously PRIVATE matters," Natalie said, visibly getting a little upset.

"Well, You se-"

"Don't you 'well' me, mister!"

"What? But I'm your boss!" the Chief said.

Natalie giggled a bit. "PFFAHAH. BOSS!?"

The chair turned, revealing the Chief to be Miranda.

"Yep. I'm your boss."

"Sacrebleu...*faints*"

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Griffon Tech is a stand-in for Georgia Tech btw
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Pinkie Pie on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:39 pm

hawksfan wrote:
Pinkie Pie wrote:
hawksfan wrote:Miranda then proceeded to hump Natalie's rump.



Is that the best you can do, OP?

Yes... Embarassed

And sure, Sovereign.

PART 2
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LE DRAMA

wait so whats the point of this chapter again
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:42 pm

Pinkie Pie wrote:
wait so whats the point of this chapter again

I felt like making it into an actual story, so I changed it up a bit.
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Sovereignty of Discord on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:44 pm

Hawks, do you have mod powers?
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:46 pm

Sovereignty of Discord wrote:Hawks, do you have mod powers?

I don't think I do.
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:47 pm

Sovereignty of Discord wrote:Hawks, do you have mod powers?

I see it now, thanks.
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Sovereignty of Discord on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:48 pm

I'm counting on you to bump the thread on OT and to keep the peace.
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:54 pm

Sovereignty of Discord wrote:I'm counting on you to bump the thread on OT and to keep the peace.

OK.
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Pinkie Pie on Mon Apr 15, 2013 8:27 am



So are you gonna post more of the story or what?
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Mon Apr 15, 2013 2:33 pm

Pinkie Pie wrote:

So are you gonna post more of the story or what?

OH. Part 3, the last part that I have made so far.

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After waking up, Natalie looked at her wings.

They were folded, but suddenly...

"*BOOOOIIIING!*"

Natalie had just gotten the biggest wingboner she had ever gotten in her life.

She fainted.

Again.

She then started lucid dreaming, and imagined a vanilla sauce waterfall.

After walking into it, Natalie started to eat in the waterfall.

"Ooohh..."

"Mmmm..."

"Augh..."

"*gulp* Oh my gosh, I think I swallowed some..."

After a while, it started to sound like she was having sex.

Miranda was listening through the door.

"Mmmph..." Natalie moaned as she kept eating the vanilla sauce, much to her enjoyment.

"Grrr... Is she cheating on me?" Miranda said, turning red with anger as Natalie kept dreaming.

She banged on the door.

Natalie then opened her eyes with a SHOCKED expression on her face, her wings folding quickly.

"... Who could that be?" She wondered.

"GRRR..." Miranda growled again, this time more aggressively.

"... Huh?" Natalie was clueless.

"ALRIGHT, THAT'S IT!!!" Miranda CHARGED through the door, breaking it in her shape.

"Oh sh-"

Miranda caused Natalie to faint a second time.

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Please note: she was saying Oh shoot, not what you thought it was.
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by Pinkie Pie on Mon Apr 15, 2013 2:59 pm

hawksfan wrote:"throw up... *pukes*"

hawksfan wrote:"Sacrebleu...*faints*"

hawksfan wrote:Miranda caused Natalie to faint a second time.



She should really see a doctor or something...
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Re: OK SO HERE IT IS:

Post by hawksfan on Mon Apr 15, 2013 3:51 pm

Pinkie Pie wrote:
hawksfan wrote:"throw up... *pukes*"

hawksfan wrote:"Sacrebleu...*faints*"

hawksfan wrote:Miranda caused Natalie to faint a second time.



She should really see a doctor or something...

Oh wow... e_e
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